Comments on the first draft of our trailer.

We got feedback on our trailer 

• From our media teacher Ms Taylor, she told us that he trailer was more of a short film as it told the whole story of the filmbut in a condensed version.
• Other members of our class said that it was too predictable because it clearly shows the teenagers getting killed which gets rid of the thrill and suspense of trailers which draws the audience to watch the movie.
• Mrs Taylor told us to mix up the shots, make them shorter as they were too long. we had to cut out any shots showing the murderer as this would create more suspense.
• So our group spent two hours playing around with the older version and then we showed it to the rest of our class and our other teacher Mrs Brady to get some more feedback.
• They all said that it was a lot better than our first version.
•  They also said that it is more of a trailer now because it is not put together in chronological order but randomly placed, so it is exciting and leaves you wanting to watch the film.
• They all loved how you can't really see the murderer anymore, because this creates the suspense of what is going to happen and leaves you wondering what happens next.
• One comment given was that we could put a voiceover in to the trailer as this would make it scarier, so we will think about whether it is possible to put it in our trailer.